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1. EXT.    RAMSAYS' BACKYARD - DAY (FAMILY VIDEO)
  We open with the jerky movements of a hand-held video camera. We hear SANDRA RAMSAY's playful, off-camera comments as she chronicles the action. A younger DOUG RAMSAY,40, carries TINA,10 — afflicted with severe cerebral palsy — from the back porch to a rusted, apple-red 1964 Chevy pickup sitting on cement blocks. The passenger doors are missing. KEITH MARTEL,25, who has Down's syndrome, stands in front of the truck, a garden hose in his hand, wearing a gleeful smile of anticipation. Doug places Tina in the passenger seat and straps her in. He walks around the car to the driver's side and asks Keith if he's ready. Keith gives him the thumbs-up sign. Doug instructs Keith to turn on the hose. Keith presses the nozzle and begins to spray the car windshield with water. Doug leans into the car and turns on the ignition. There is no sound save for the motion of the moving windshield wipers. Tina begins to laugh. She is delighted by the wipers. Keith is delighted to be contributing to her laughter. Doug and Sandra join the chorus of laughter.
  The video is rewound to the moment where Tina begins to laugh at the wipers. After a few moments of laughter it is rewound again. More laughter. We have no idea who is rewinding the tape, who is watching, where it is being watched.


2. EXT.    FIRE TOWER - DAY
  Saskatchewan: the present. Autumn. Doug, 42, stands at the top of the tower. Keith, 27, is beside him. They lean over the tower railing and peer down below, grinning like two boys on the verge of a prank. Keith leans over even further and waves. Doug gently places his hand on Keith's shoulder.
  DOUG
    Careful, now.  
  Sandra waves back. She's at the foot of the tower, crouched next to Tina, 12, who sits in a wheelchair. Tina's deterioration is in stark contrast to the video images from only two years before. Her head is slouched to one side, her eyes are partially crossed, her mouth is slack and drooling. Her body is a twisted tangle of misshapen limbs. Sandra holds Tina's hand, which is curled into a fist, and lovingly massages Tina's fingers. Sandra has short, black hair and an angular face, a blend of studiousness and chiselled sorrow.
  KEITH (O.S.)
    Ready?  
  SANDRA
    Ready!  
  Keith now holds a large, colourful bird crafted out of plastic and wood. He releases the bird, which slowly, gracefully drifts down. As soon as the bird is released Doug and Keith race down the tower stairs in order to reach the ground before the bird lands, laughing as they jostle each other to see who'll reach the bottom first.
  Sandra is at the foot of the tower, trying to engage Tina.
  SANDRA
    Look, sweetheart. Look up.  
  Sandra tilts Tina's head up, but Tina is oblivious to the bird. She kisses her index finger, then taps Tina's nose twice: her signature kiss. Keith has reached the bottom first and is about to catch the bird when Doug tackles him. More laughter as Keith and Doug roll on the ground.
  DOUG
    You make a lousy mama bird, y'hear me? A lousy mama bird.  
  Sandra grins and shakes her head as if watching two irrepressible adolescents. Tina moans gently. Doug and Keith dust themselves off. Keith holds the bird in his hand. He crouches by Tina.
  KEITH
    Did you like it, Tina? Did you like the way it flew?  
  Keith stands and imitates a bird in flight. He leans over and whispers into Tina's ear.
  KEITH
    I have a surprise for you. Soon. Really soon.  
  Doug arrives, reaches over and lifts Tina out of the wheelchair. Tina cries out in pain: a wrenching cry. Doug and Sandra both react with quick, almost involuntary winces. Doug begins to carry Tina over to the same apple-red Chevy pickup seen in the opening video, only now it is rust-free and completely refurbished, RAMSAY'S HARDWARE written in bright yellow letters on the doors. Keith is close behind, pushing the empty wheelchair, holding the bird in one hand. Sandra rolls up a blanket and picks up a thermos.
  They reach the pickup, where Doug straps Tina into her seat. Keith lifts the wheelchair into the back. Doug helps roll it into a custom-made harness beneath the cab window. Sandra places the blanket and thermos in the front seat. Keith has found a long length of string in the back of the pickup and has attached one end to his kite-like bird.
  DOUG
    What's that you're cooking up there?  
  KEITH
    I'm taking my bird for a walk.  
  DOUG
    You're taking her for a fly.  
  KEITH
  (grinning)
    She's not a fly. She's a bird.  
  Doug playfully pushes Keith away. Keith mounts his bike.
  DOUG
    Need a lift?  
  KEITH
  (smiling)
    I got my bike.  
  Sandra's heard this routine a thousand times before.
  DOUG
    I could give your bike a lift, too.  
  KEITH
    No, thanks.  
  Keith coasts to the front of the pickup.
  KEITH
    Bye, Tina.  
  (whispers)
    Watch this.  
  He waves at Doug and Sandra and pedals off, across a short stretch of field and onto the road. He still holds the bird in one hand. He is furiously pedalling his bike. The bird flies behind him, soaring skyward, rising higher and higher as Keith pumps his legs and unfurls more string. Doug smiles, his eyes locked onto the bobbing bird.


3. EXT.    ROAD - DAY
  Keith pedals his bike through a gentle rainfall. A large tractor trailer honks behind him. Keith pulls over. The truck is a feast of colour, the first in a convoy of a travelling carnival. Keith watches the trucks pass by, soaking in the graphics on the trucks - animals, clowns, the bearded lady - as he waves to the drivers. Some honk.


4. INT.    DOUG'S PICKUP - DAY
  Doug drives through the rain. The only sounds heard are the wipers, and Tina's laboured breathing. Sandra reaches toward the steering wheel, leaning over Tina, and adjusts a lever. The wipers speed up. She leans back in her seat. A moment later, she leans over again and adjusts the wiper lever. The wipers move even faster. Sandra waits, looks at Tina. She leans over once again, adjusts the lever. The wipers move at full speed. The rhythm is frantic.
  SANDRA
    (singing)  
  The wipers on the bus go back and forth, back and forth, back and forth. The wipers on the bus go back and forth, all through the town.
  She looks at Tina with unblinking hope. Tina doesn't respond. Doug initiates another round of the song. Sandra accompanies him, but they soon peter out when they realize it's in vain. Doug keeps his eyes on Tina instead of the road. Suddenly, there's a sickening thud. Sandra screams.


5. INT.    RAMSAY'S HARDWARE STORE: BACKROOM - DAY
  Keith is about to take off his jacket but can't resist running his hand along a newly-finished bird house set on a work table. He is surrounded by hardware supplies. In the background is a small fridge and an old tabletop hockey game that sits on two makeshift supports.


6. EXT.    ROAD - DAY
  Doug and Sandra stand by the side of the road, gazing at a dog that is still breathing but not long for this world. CRAIG PIERCE,40, an RCMP officer, stands to one side. Craig — with thin hair and thick biceps — is tall and broad-shouldered. His patrol car is parked behind the pickup, where Tina still sits.
  DOUG
    I didn't see it coming.  
  SANDRA
    Don't go blaming yourself.  
  Craig nods sympathetically, pulls out his revolver and shoots the dog. Sandra winces. Doug looks at the pickup to see if Tina has registered the sound of gunfire.
  DOUG
    What the hell did you do that for? You could've given Tina a coronary.  
  CRAIG
    I was thinking about the dog.  
  SANDRA
    He's just doing his job.  
  CRAIG
    How fast were you going, Doug?  
  DOUG
  (hesitates)
    I don't know.  
  SANDRA
    Not fast, with the rain and all.  
  CRAIG
    You keep your eyes on the road.  
  Sandra smiles appreciatively. Doug still has his eyes on the dog.
  DOUG
    I'll clean this up.  


7. INT.    RAMSAY'S HARDWARE STORE - DAY
  Keith is in the front of the store, choosing between two small paint brushes. He's now wearing a carpenter's apron and takes the task at hand very seriously. DARRELL, 21, creeps up behind him. Darrell's black hair looks like it perpetually needs to be washed. He still has the residue of adolescent acne. He is wearing a fall jacket and is carrying a can of new paint in each hand.
  DARRELL
    Boo!  
  Keith is startled, turns around and is relieved to see it is Darrell.
  KEITH
    What are you doing here? It's Sunday. We're closed on Sundays.  
  Darrell holds up the paint cans.
  DARRELL
    I came to pick up my fringe benefits.  
  He places the paint cans down and puts a hand over Keith's shoulder.
  DARRELL
    The way I figure, minimum wage is okay for people with minimum brains. People like me deserve more.  
  KEITH
    You're stealing.  
  Darrell grabs a brush out of Keith's hand.
  DARRELL
    Now you, what you're doing. That's stealing.  
  Keith grabs the brush back.
  KEITH
    Dougie lets me.  
  DARRELL
    Then this'll have to be our little secret. You can keep a secret, can't you, Keith?  
  Keith nods. Darrell mirrors Keith's nod.


8. INT.    RAMSAYS' HOUSE: KITCHEN - DAY
  Doug and Sandra sit at the kitchen table. Sandra sips coffee as Doug repairs an old blender. We hear a cartoon playing in the living room.
  DOUG
    I was thinking of going fishing this afternoon. Taking Tina along.  
  SANDRA
    She's in no shape to go fishing.  
  DOUG
    It's not like I'm stiff competition.  
  SANDRA
    I'm going to call Dr. Kovacs.  
  Sandra looks at Doug, anticipating a strong reaction. Doug uses silence to state his case.
  SANDRA
    There must be something she can do.  
  DOUG
    We don't need Kovacs. She's cut her up plenty. What we need are painkillers.  
  SANDRA
    Well maybe Dr. Kovacs can give us new painkillers.  
  DOUG
    Son of a bitch!  
  Doug pulls his hand back and begins to suck on a cut finger. Sandra begins to laugh.
  DOUG
    What's so funny?  
  SANDRA
    That thing's older than me. Don't you think it's time you threw it out?  
  DOUG
    A minor tune-up's all she needs.  
  Sandra stands up and heads out of the kitchen.
  SANDRA
    You need a bandaid.  
  DOUG
  (calling out to her)
    I'm taking her fishing.  


9. INT.    POST OFFICE - AFTERNOON
  Albert, an avuncular postal worker, hands a small package to a gleeful Doug.
  ALBERT
    You make me feel like Santa Claus.  
  DOUG
  (grinning)
    I'm not gonna climb onto your lap, Albert.  


10. INT.    INSIDE DOUG'S PICKUP - AFTERNOON
  Doug slides into his seat and shows Tina the package.
  DOUG
    Maybe this'll help. It's this herbal remedy I read about. They have this 1-800 number so I called 'em and the woman on the other end, she sounded real positive. Me, I'm a hard sell, but I -  
  Doug stops in mid-track and simply squeezes Tina's hand.
  DOUG
    Everything's worth a try, right?  
  Tina stares straight ahead. Doug raises her hand with his, as though in victory.
  DOUG
    Right.  
  He lets go of her hand and turns on the ignition.


11. EXT.    LAKE - LATE AFTERNOON
  Doug and Tina sit on a small dock, fishing. Tina's rod is attached to her wheelchair. Doug sits on an overturned bucket, savouring the silence, the tranquility, the time with his daughter. He hestitates before he finally speaks it's as if he's reluctant to shatter the peace.
  DOUG
    No more operations, okay? You have my word. No more.  
  Doug looks at Tina. She moans softly. He lovingly brushes a lock of hair behind Tina's ear then begins to hum a lullaby-type melody. He carries the tune in ways that tell us he has sung it to her a thousand times before. Only now he sings alone: in his look he wills her to join in. She sits stone-faced. Suddenly, Tina's rod starts to bob: she's caught a fish. Doug starts to reel it in.
  DOUG
  (smiling)
    Well, I'll be damned! Look what you just did!  
  He looks at Tina with a parent's pride, then struggles to sustain his smile as the moment washes over Tina.


12. EXT.    RAMSAYS' YARD - NIGHT
  Doug, Sandra, Tina and Keith sit around a fire, roasting marshmallows. Keith carefully roasts the marshmallow at the end of Tina's stick, which is wedged into the side of her wheelchair. He removes the golden marshmallow and holds it before Tina triumphantly.
  KEITH
    There. Nice and brown.  
  He hands the marshmallow to Sandra, who feeds it to Tina by pushing small bits into her mouth.
  DOUG
    All that's missing is a big mug of hot chocolate.  
  SANDRA
    Is that a hint?  
  DOUG
    It's a thought.  
  Keith's own marshmallow is now in flames. He waves it in front of Tina, vainly trying to get her attention.
  SANDRA
    Whoa!  
  KEITH
    She likes watching fires!  
  Doug and Sandra both watch Keith trying to grab Tina's attention with the burning marshmallow. Both can see it's having no impact whatsoever. Sandra finally speaks.
  SANDRA
    I called Dr. Kovacs. She said she can see us tomorrow.  
  KEITH
    The carnival is here.  
  DOUG
    I told you. We don't need Kovacs. What we need are alterna -  
  SANDRA
    We need help. She's getting worse.  
  KEITH
    She can still go, can't she? To the carnival?  
  DOUG
    Yes.  
  SANDRA
  (simultaneously)
    No. (BEAT) She's in no shape to go the carnival.  
  KEITH
    She went last year. Remember? On top of the ferris wheel?  
  SANDRA
    How can you talk about ferris wheels when she's looking like this?  
  DOUG
    We can make it better. Without Kovacs.  
  SANDRA
    How?  
  KEITH
    We can go to the carnival.  
  DOUG
    We haven't tried that herbal medicine, have we?  
  SANDRA
    We've tried a dozen different herbal treatments.  
  DOUG
    This one might do the trick.  
  SANDRA
    She needs a helluva lot more than herbs right now.  
  KEITH
    Maybe the bumper cars.  
  SANDRA
    Will you please shut up about your god damn carnival!  
  Sandra storms off. Doug begins to walk after her, then thinks better of it. He returns to Tina's side and carefully wipes the bits of marshmallow around her mouth. Unwittingly, it becomes an unspoken, private moment until Keith interrupts.
  KEITH
    Maybe the carousel.  
  DOUG
    Maybe.  
 


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